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Talkin' Trash
Contributed by
Blu
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 09:25:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sprawling grey
asphalt consuming asphalt
chasing despair and insanity
Monday in Seattle
on the 74
heading north-
anticipation is left
in the jaws of hopelessness
like carrion
Lavender does not bloom here
there is no
hopeful familiarity
But yes,
crazy is for sale
as long as you have a buck fifty
Where is the warmth
that once kissed
its emerald face?
Going home now
on the 74
talkin trash
and buying crazy
for only a buck fity.
Copyright ©
Blu
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2005-01-03 09:25:48]
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Re: Talkin' Trash
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:41:31 PM AEST
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ill just take your word for it, because ill never go there. i loved the line,
"crazy is for sale
as long as you have a buck fifty"
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Re: Talkin' Trash
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 09:21:50 PM AEST
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Yep, this about explains it. Mind you, I don't live there and never plan to, but i've been there a few times. the lines
"anticipation is left
in the jaws of hopelessness
like carrion"
are awsome. Nice rythem and repetition as well. |
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