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Nothing Is As It Seems
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
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Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:15:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
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but you don't feel me anymore...
My heart in a hundred thousand shards
Sure I would be permanently scarred
Till someone else opened up my eyes
And helped me to finally say goodbye
Took away my worries with his smile
Made everything seem somehow worthwhile
His happiness was so beyond me
I wondered if I could ever be that free
Fascinated, his mind I explored
Was he the key I'd been looking for?
Life was good, for once I was happy
I let him in and prayed he'd stay here with me
Then one night it all shattered inside
And I couldn't hide it though I tried
Torn apart a hundred times in vain
Knew I couldn't walk away, no matter the pain
But how could I stay with someone who
Could not love me even if he tried to?
Knowing he can never feel the way
He made me feel as my tears fell away
Poetic rhymes from a madman's mind
Killed me slowly, struggling to find
A way to deal with loving someone
Who cannot feel me even as I come undone...
though never loved, I am adored...
Now nothing is as it seems
I look but my eyes do not see
And although I don't belong
I'll lay with you until the dawn...
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2005-01-03 10:15:47]
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Re: Nothing Is As It Seems
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:28:29 PM AEST
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| great write Moonlit, thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Nothing Is As It Seems
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:19:03 PM AEST
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| *staring in aw at the poem because no comment would do it justice* |
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Re: Nothing Is As It Seems
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by Bridget_theMidget_Powerz on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:31:16 PM AEST
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| such an expression of emotion, it's sad, and powerful, and so many things. Great job. |
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Re: Nothing Is As It Seems
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:00:19 AM AEST
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Dam* this is beyond words, no comment can do this poem justice. Great write Dee.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Nothing Is As It Seems
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by TheReturnOfx7 on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:14:57 PM AEST
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now where do you get that never loved stuff from.......lol...
anyways Dee, you know I love your poetry as it caputres the best parts of a truely beautiful mind and soul. Take care
-Jase |
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Re: Nothing Is As It Seems
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by Black13 on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 10:23:40 PM AEST
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I desperately want to say I know...
I can't fully though because I don't.
Mayhap someday something with him will change...
I loved this one Dee, I loved so many lines in this one and it's true nothing said about this one will ever do it justice. |
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Re: Nothing Is As It Seems
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by Mystical_Raven on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:39:04 PM AEST
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A person can only change when they know to change and what to change....how to change.
I question more and more... |
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Re: Nothing Is As It Seems
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 12:03:22 AM AEST
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I admire the openness with which you wrote this. To me, it feels as if these emotions are being immortalized, in a way. Sounds silly, but I suppose that is one of the reasons we write - to turn our emotions into an epic of sorts, something to be remembered, by ourselves at least. Beautifully done.
Andrew |
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