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Morning
Contributed by
Nezenic
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:18:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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One cut of my wrist
One slit under my fist
Day will say goodnight
But don't worry, don't cry
The morning will come
And I'll be all right
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Nezenic
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2005-01-03 10:18:56]
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Re: Morning
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by blueeyedevil13 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:55:16 AM AEST
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its like during the night u are free and when the day comes you pretend everything is alright. its good, it has many meanings to me its really good. keep writing
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Re: Morning
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by Artemis03 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:04:40 AM AEST
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Yea that is true ..I feel the exact same..During the day its all smiles for the world..but they mean nothing...At night is when i'm free I can be myself..cry all I need to let out. ya know. No one really sees me
or realy knows how I feel inside. Freat write.It made me think about myself in many ways. |
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Re: Morning
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by assassinatorgirl on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:44:30 AM AEST
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| Great poem. |
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Re: Morning
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:26:43 PM AEST
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| powerful. short and to the point. written well. |
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Re: Morning
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by faith_my_eyes on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:13:27 PM AEST
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| did you write this for me Joe? it feels like you did. Keep that hope alive. |
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Re: Morning
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by Tru2Myself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 01:03:49 PM AEST
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| Wow. Just like everyone else who posted I hide the real me during the day and let it out at night. Its amazing I love it. Now i realize there are so many people who feel the same why. Thank you. |
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