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It's My Fight
Contributed by
Artemis03
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Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:31:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Don't fight against me
You will not win.
Please, don't fight for me.
I can only listen to the voice within.
Don't try and fight with me,
Because I can only rely on myself in the very end.
I can handle it, it's my war
I just want nothing more
than you to leave me alone
I don't need you so go !.
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Artemis03
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2005-01-03 10:31:12]
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Re: It's My Fight
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by blueeyedevil13 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:41:20 AM AEST
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excellent write, you said so little but said so much at the same time. i can relate to this in some cases
I can only listen to the voice within.
Don't try and fight with me,
Because I can only rely on myself in the very end.
excellent part. so true. |
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Re: It's My Fight
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by The_Callif on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:10:38 AM AEST
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| true true, good write |
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Re: It's My Fight
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 01:12:16 PM AEST
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You don't have to fight alone ...
Very simple very forward and you said what needs to be said.. great write. PGL.. sandy |
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Re: It's My Fight
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by TaintedSoul on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 02:10:39 PM AEST
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There are times when we all feel the need to step back, be alone and lick our wounds. But, we also have to realise that we cannot always go it alone.
Short but definately succinct.
peace
TS |
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Re: It's My Fight
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 03:24:41 PM AEST
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| excellent write. very humanlike. =] |
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Re: It's My Fight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 05:17:36 PM AEST
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You're right-we have to rely on ourselves in the end, but a little support when it all gets bleak is a wonderful way to rally. Don't forget it!!
Good write. |
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Re: It's My Fight
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 04:00:33 PM AEST
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| Does this whole thing still apply? |
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Re: It's My Fight
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by Unheard_Mute on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 08:12:28 PM AEST
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wow, short but it still was very good...
this is how I think people think when I try and help them, but I have the compulsive need to do so... but I actually think I help, or at least hope I do... everyone needs someone |
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