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The Last Time...
Contributed by
Delusions
on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Why did you have to hurt me so much,
Why did you leave me here,
alone,
to cry?
I gave you so many chances,
I gave you all the love I had.
You told me you loved me,
And you acted like it too,
Like it was the truth,
But no, Thats all it was,
All an act,
Every single time.
You told me you'd never hurt me again,
You promised,
And i believed you...
That was the last time.
I still think about you,
and still love you so much,
It hurts,
And I cry,
And I remember every day I spent with you,
When you still "loved" me,
When you "Cared".
But That was the last time,
And I cant let you hurt me again,
I wont let you,
Not ever again...
Copyright ©
Delusions
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2002-12-02 10:30:00]
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Re: The Last Time...
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by OreO on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 10:38:08 AM AEST
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This must have been so painful for you, it's sad that people disregard one's love like as tho it's nothing, i enjoyed reading this it definately gives one alot to think about, and the ending of this poem where you said you can't let it hurt you again, tht you won't let the person hurt you not ever again was absolutely beautiful, that's what gave me chillbumps. Thanks for sharing this one
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Re: The Last Time...
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by BlackAngel on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 06:58:48 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel, I too felt somewhat the same, Great Write |
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Re: The Last Time...
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 06:52:42 AM AEST
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i know exactly what your talking about, i hate men.... i really do, they dont no what they do to us, ok we arent always little angels, but men r alot worse....
xxx |
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Re: The Last Time...
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 09:13:51 PM AEST
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| This is so sad. I read this and felt almost like it was something I wrote. I know how you feel...It hurts..... |
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Re: The Last Time...
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by unforgiven on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 02:26:15 AM AEST
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those first loves always end up hurtful but u never forget them for some reason. all of these mixed up emotions run through ur head when ur with that person and it's so confusing...another great job huni.
becca ~xoxo~ |
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Re: The Last Time...
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by Alphas0z on
Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 11:18:13 AM AEST
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I think you expressed yourself quite nicely.
But sorry to hear about it, everything will be alright :) |
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