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dreams of you
Contributed by
karmen
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 04:35:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sitting here in the dark,
thinking of only you.
Blocking out everything else,
once again your on my mind.
I'm realizing how much
I need you here,
how alone I really am.
Just talking on the phone with you makes
everything better, Your the only thing,
In my thoughts, day and night.
Close my eyes, and picture being
with you, in your arms.
Feeling so safe, like I've never felt before.
Now I can't wait for the day,
the day we're together.
So I will no longer have to sit here,
in the dark and wonder,
I'll finally know.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2005-01-03 16:35:40]
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Re: dreams of you
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by jjones12 on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 05:01:55 PM AEST
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| Really Good! WHo is it about,your bf?Write back if you want! |
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Re: dreams of you
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by destinysseduction on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 05:08:04 PM AEST
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lovely sentiments as you paint a sadfelt picture well, but try to learn to 'show' and not just 'tell' your feelings...you also had a few typos, make sure to check your spelling...
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Re: dreams of you
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by hoist1atca on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 05:30:51 PM AEST
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Good Poem-
They say "absence makes the heart grow fonder"-
Think of how much love will have grown when the two are united as one...
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