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Duck Toy
Contributed by
punkwthn
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Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:53:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Duck toy on a string.
So pathetic and weak.
Cherishing everything.
He controls your heart.
So blind and naive.
Believing it all from the start.
His love belongs to another.
So foolish and immature.
False hope that you have each other.
His promises mean nothing.
So sad and hurt.
Forking over your life, so trusting.
He sets you free.
So disappointed.
Why cant you leave?
Duck toy on a string.
So pathetic and weak.
Cherishing everything.
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punkwthn
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2005-01-03 18:53:40]
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Re: Duck Toy
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 06:57:53 PM AEST
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| nice poem,most relationships are like that it makes you feel your stringed to a certain type. |
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Re: Duck Toy
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by SeptChill on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:43:59 PM AEST
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| The poem was alright. I couldn't really understand the relationship, or the duck toy on the string. I liked the rhyme scheme, but the poem seemed written from something inside you that an outsider would have trouble understanding |
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Re: Duck Toy
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by TaintedSoul on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 08:10:10 PM AEST
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Ahh yes, great analogy here. Relationships can leave us feeling like that little duck with the flapping feet with a toddler pulling us along. Only to leave us stranded in the yard for a bigger and better toy.
peace
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