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Red
Contributed by
gabby521
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:02:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Quietly, unnoticed, the sun going down
Watches day end
In her red night gown
She looks and ponders upon all that she sees
Like the bright red fruit of an apple tree
The rose-red lips of a girl looking on
As the red star fades
Into the unknown beyond
Beneath the blanket of a now clear sky
She shines red beams on all passing by
The dotted red wings that set on a ladybug's back
Are shown from the petals of red rose rack.
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2005-01-03 19:02:41]
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Re: Red
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 08:41:57 PM AEST
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| Wow. Such great similies. What wonderful imagery, for such a short poem. Good write |
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Re: Red
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by english-pea-pelter on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 08:42:35 PM AEST
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| i can see the shade of red. |
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Re: Red
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by jesusofholland on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 09:18:39 AM AEST
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| This poem really came alive in my mind. Good description and imagery. I very much enjoyed it! |
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