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Artwork
Contributed by
taintedsoul
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Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I.
Tangled mess of hair and blood
Dangling from the ceiling fan
Painted walls done up
All in red, blood does work well
When it comes to redecorating
Spin art with the ceiling fan
Bringing back memories of long ago
Of sitting there in art class
Letting my mind go
Free
II.
Listless bodies, hanging from a hook
All clumped together, oh so neatly
Each drips a steady stream of blood
See the pretty red pool upon the floor?
What mind brought this artful piece to life
I truly do wonder
So twisted yet beautiful and original
Perfection of gutting is displayed
In glorious detail, within this human sculpture
Topped off with a raven, feasting
Upon an eye, which it has loosened with its beak
A tasty morsel, I must say
As the raven devours my eye, whilst with me gazing
With one eye left, as blood drips down my face
Tiny rivulets
III.
Insert the knife, into the flesh
Hear the howl of escaping breath
From the slit placed nicely upon the neck
Windpipe shattered, just like glass
Look of fright, permanently etched
Into the eyes, they coldly stare ahead
As you move the knife downward
Ah, the sternum
Where the heart resides
Beneath ribs, and the stale air of lungs
Does rise forth, as they are punctured
With a million tiny nails, brought forth
From a hideous machine
Continue now, to filet and dismember
Organs that pulse and shudder
Let them spill out now, upon the floor
To be squashed beneath a booted foot
Intestinal trail, for the dogs to munch
Pull forth, the slowly dying heart
Inspection proves a delicious morsel
This pulsating muscle truly is
And watch, with lovely eyes
The blood that drips down
A hand uplifted, towards the heavens
With said prize
Lap up this red, metallic and sweet
Life giving nectar, truly
A heaven sent treat!
Puncture the arms and pull out the strings
Make this body a living puppet
With dead black eyes, to do your bidding
Bloody strings entwine with fingers
While the head bobbles from side to side
Master of puppets, the human kind
As this sweetness flows now, freely
Lap up this red, metallic and sweet
Life giving nectar, truly
A heaven sent treat!
17 December 2003 - 16 January 2004
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Re: Artwork
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by Blu on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:42:20 PM AEST
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Love love love love love this. Have you ready the comic Johnny The Homicidal Maniac? It's one of my favs. This reminds me of that. Very nice imagery also, I saw the whole thing happen. Good write.
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Re: Artwork
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by LevyMetal on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 07:51:00 PM AEST
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| And enjoy i did. Wonderful. I truely loved this peice. Only complaint is the useage of "Master of puppets"-im a huge Metallica fan. I might have to tell Lars, so if you get sued in the near future, im the one who turned you in. lol =) |
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Re: Artwork
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by shamateur on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:25:52 PM AEST
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| I love this, it's dark this is very descriptive- interestingly excellent work |
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