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Anger
Contributed by
Nixzy
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 08:08:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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My mind starts to thicken,
My stare is sharp and my grip so tight,
My head is expanding with words and phrases,
My teeth start to grind and my heart beats fast.
Im shaking with anger,
Im feeling so cold,
I just want to hate you,
I just want to hurt you,
I just want you to leave,
Let me be me.
I cant take this from you any more,
You have messed me around before,
Ive let you go so many times,
Not now.
Too far.
My anger is raging and you are the target,
Leave me now and let my temperature settle.
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Nixzy
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2005-01-03 20:08:56]
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Re: Anger
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 08:31:05 PM AEST
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| Great poem. It uses good imagery. And the emotions are portrayed well, so fierce and raw. You might want to use a less comon title, something more attention grabbing. Great Write |
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Re: Anger
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by shamateur on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:20:23 PM AEST
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| I can't explain how many times i've felt this way, good work |
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