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°°°My Best Friends°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Have you ever had them real special friends
That passed you by in that party you were in
The one that offers nice warm places to hide
Those special friends that comfort your mind...
Can you picture how faithful they are to me
They kiss my soul, They are there in my need
I hear their words how they comfort me
Running through my veins is where they sleep..
I don't want to share them for they are all mine
I'll keep them eternally for all time
I'll show you how they make me feel
And show you my friends are very real...
Now Meth is a strong liquified type of friend
He runs through my veins with a warm cinge
He takes all my cares and he tucks them away
And makes every moment a time to play...
Coke is a teaser he'll make you want more
And tell you that you'll be ok in the morn
He teases my heart and he makes it beat fast
He comes in large bulks, in quanities that last...
Weed is most everybody's old best friend
He searches my mind time and time again
He knows how to make you hungry and to sleep
He makes you sit still, he won't let you weep
Now Acid he's the one who gives fright
He puts beautiful visions before your eyes
He goes many places and searches for more
And before your eyes he'll kill people adored...
Speed is the one i cherish most of all
He lifts me up high and he makes me stand tall
He never does fail me he gives me a smile
He's my very best friend he's worth my while...
Now these are my friends and i cherish their worth
Don't judge me because it's with death i flirt
My friends i do know will stab me in my back
And leave me alone for another human to track...
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-12-02 12:30:00]
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Re: °°°My Best Friends°°°
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 12:59:33 PM AEST
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| If thats how you feel, and those are your true friends, thats pretty sad indeed. |
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Re: °°°My Best Friends°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 01:49:33 PM AEST
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Wow Oreo, I dont know what to say,I've never been there,Never will,but it was different how you made them into your friends!
I'm glad this was your past & you put this behind you! Christina |
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Re: °°°My Best Friends°°°
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 10:30:40 PM AEST
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Hey OreO,
I been there myself when I was younger I know what that's like, but at least you came to grips with it and did the right thing, some never do. Outstanding write.
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Re: °°°My Best Friends°°°
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by Necronomy on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 12:18:52 AM AEST
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it's pretty sad when ppl have to post anonymously. anyone that can't put a name to their beliefs must not have very much faith in what they are saying.
great job OreO, strange times makes for strange bedfellows, innit? |
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Re: °°°My Best Friends°°°
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 08:46:46 PM AEST
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HI OREO,
THIS IS AVERY GOOD WRITE,KEEP IT UP. |
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Re: °°°My Best Friends°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 09:18:18 AM AEST
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| Oh yea...I did my time with the same old friends my dear. Great, emotional write as always. Larry |
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Re: °°°My Best Friends°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 02:06:05 AM AEST
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Well OreO, You don't have to have those "friends" now... You have real friends! :)
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Re: °°°My Best Friends°°°
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by Sarah22 on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 12:57:29 AM AEST
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lovely work
on this one . |
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Re: °°°My Best Friends°°°
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by InexactExactness on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 11:26:36 AM AEST
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I hope these guys aren't your best friends still. I mean you got all of us on this website who adore you and your poetry. No need for them. I love the write though. I saw the title and thought it was going to pay homage to your best friends...like people friends...so to hear about meth, coke, wee, speed, acid etc was an offguard catch. But I definately enjoyed it. Thank you OreO. You're So special :)
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Re: °°°My Best Friends°°°
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 04:19:24 PM AEST
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| I've been stabbed in the back by a few friends I had in another poetry site. That's why I left. Good read. Happy Holidays. Thanx for the feedback. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: °°°My Best Friends°°°
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by wordsy on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:41:06 PM AEST
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With friends like these, who needs enemies. Although I must admit, I'm a bit of a head myself. Just be careful. Moderation is the key of life.
wordsy. |
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