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Exposure
Contributed by
Tanna
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Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 09:45:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Shyly, she had given her heart to him
And he eventually tossed it back in her face
Despondant, desolate
She withdrew in stark disgrace
To overwrought to understand
To raw to really care
Staring blankly at the photo
She uttered a sigh of despair
Two months of torturous soul searching
Determining who she is, and who she is not
Not always liking the picture
But finding the woman she almost forgot
The warped mirror exposing reflections
Hazy images of lifetimes past
Distinct ideals for her tomorrows
Fused into a deranged contrast
Snapping out of this illusion
I glance down at his photo in my hand
Carefully, I tuck it into the bureau
Determined to meet life head on, and make a stand.
Copyright ©
Tanna
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2005-01-03 21:45:07]
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Re: Exposure
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by Ravensfire on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 10:14:09 PM AEST
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| beautifully written, your poem touched my very soul, thank you. |
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Re: Exposure
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by emystar on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:11:59 PM AEST
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Snapping out of this illusion
I glance down at his photo in my hand
Carefully, I tuck it into the bureau
Determined to meet life head on, and make a stand.
That's my favorite part.
Hang tuff friend as you'll get thru.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy
It's a masterpeice of determination. |
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Re: Exposure
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 04:25:56 PM AEST
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| Very solid write |
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