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Silver Tears
Contributed by
Dragontear27
on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 11:48:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Thou dark eyes bleed a silvery drop
shining with the moonlight glaze
it lands on the floor with an errie plop
melting away in the Summer's deathly blaze
your eyes bleed more of the silvery tears
as they slip away from your cheeks
they can wash away your meaningless fears
right down to that which so much reeks
But once dripping down you soon realize
those tears of yours are cherished
because they come from your heart and not your eyes
and without that feeling they'll soon perish
So the next tear you shead opon the ground
don't think of it as somthing pathetic
because that drop can be a beautiful sound
so just leave it alone and dont regret it
Copyright ©
Dragontear27
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2005-01-03 23:48:55]
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Re: Silver Tears
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by Mangs on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:11:23 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem.....loved the way uve described tears...
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Re: Silver Tears
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by Pyrofungus on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:21:25 PM AEST
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wow...beautiful...the last stanza...loved and thats a great way of looking at it...nicly done
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