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You Learn..
Contributed by
mihir
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Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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After a while, you learn the subtle difference,
Between holding a hand and chaining a soul,
And you learn that love doesn't mean security,
And company doesn't mean security,
And you begin to learn that kisses aren't contracts,
And presents aren't promises,
And you begin to accept your defeats,
With your head up and your eyes open,
With the grace of a man, not the grief of a child,
And you learn to build all your roads on today
Because tomorrow's ground is too uncertain for plans.
And futures have a way of falling down in midflight.
After a while you learn
That even sunshine burns if you get too much,
So you plant your own garden and decorate your own soul,
Instead of waiting for someone to bring you flowers.
And you learn that you really can endure...
That you really are strong.
And you really do have worth..
And you learn and you learn..
With every goodbye you learn.....
Copyright ©
mihir
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2002-12-02 14:30:00]
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Re: You Learn..
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by Love_letters on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 03:04:51 PM AEST
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I loved your poem. I really can appreciate art such as this. It makes me feel good to know there are many aspiring writers out there such as you & I.
Keep with the same style of writing. It is similiar to my style. It works for you. Your poetry has depth, feeling, and message that makes you think after you've read it.
Please view my poems as well. I'd appreciate your feedback. |
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Re: You Learn..
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 03:34:48 PM AEST
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Hey mihir, this is very good, especially AS YOU COPIED THE WHOLE POEM from an already published author...AS YOU DID THE FIRST ONE YOU POSTED HERE.
I seem to have a copy of it right in front me now in a book I've had for over 10 yrs, and it's the same except for the last two lines. hey..why don't you try writing your own poems.
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Re: You Learn..
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 03:41:32 PM AEST
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By the way, I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO YOUR NEXT POST!!!! Maybe I'll have a copy of it also.
Keep them coming.
*Disgusted*
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