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Darkness takes control
Contributed by
Naughtygurl
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:21:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Alone again
As if being held
in the arms of darkness
Acold breeze
like a whisper
to the trees
that only you can hear.
Your heart holds lonliness to your lover
and lost souls
weakness fills your body
and you fall
Tears fall down
like silver streams
and waterfalls
that streak your face,
and scar your soul.
and once again
here it is ,
darkness takes control.
Copyright ©
Naughtygurl
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2005-01-04 15:21:23]
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Re: Darkness takes control
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:44:48 PM AEST
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"like a whisper
to the trees
that only you can hear."
is my favorite part. oh and the silver streams. produces a unique feeling, good job.
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