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Carbon Copy
Contributed by
LevyMetal
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 05:24:48 PM in AEST
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I close my eyes and heed the pain
I bit my lip and stomache the erge
Civil words and i punch the wall
It hurts that you dont know me at all. =
I cry this distance and plow the surface
I flip a coin and hope for your repentance
Break the door in spite of shame
It hurts to be the barrel of blame =o
I am the creep and i am the swelling
I write you letters and change your sheets
Modern english and i hit the floor
It hurts to think i dont know you anymore =o(
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Re: Carbon Copy
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 05:49:52 PM AEST
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| Good solid write. |
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Re: Carbon Copy
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by poetmarie on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:41:40 PM AEST
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| Well written. A solid and tight piece. Love the wording. Barrel of blame. I am the creep and I am the swelling. Definitely gives the message depth. |
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