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What the Hell Were you Thinking?
Contributed by
poetmarie
on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:39:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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What the hell were you thinking
who do think I am
what gives you the right
to steal my peace
to steal a piece of me
a piece of my dignity
a piece of my trust
what the hell were you thinking
how could you do that to another human being
how can you live with yourself
do you realize what you've done to me
how you've made me feel
my mind a mass of angry confusion
what the hell were you thinking
I'm not a piece of meat
I'm a human being
with a brain and a heart, not just a body
if only you could feel what I feel
if only you knew what you've done
what the hell were you thinking
my mistake, you weren't
but you know what
you will not destroy me
I am strong and I will overcome
Nothing else to say.
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poetmarie
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2005-01-04 19:39:57]
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Re: What the Hell Were you Thinking?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:43:07 PM AEST
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Whoo! Strong emotion there. Yeah, I think you meant "who do YOU think I am" on the second line. Still, it's the poem of a survivor. Good write!
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Re: What the Hell Were you Thinking?
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by declinefoale on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:43:54 PM AEST
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| wow, i hope the person who made you say angry doesn't run it to you anytime soon.... |
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Re: What the Hell Were you Thinking?
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by brokenwings on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:42:40 PM AEST
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| WHOA.... that was great.. made me think... keep up the good work... |
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Re: What the Hell Were you Thinking?
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:38:22 AM AEST
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this is powerful and honest sorry 4 your pain hope
all goes well soon 4 u verry nice writting . . .
Dorian Chambers
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