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Tsunami
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:31:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tsunami ~~~~ How does one start their whole live over? After devastation consumes all theyve ever know Taken from them is their own existence Their way of life, their hopes and future
Lives torn apart, families destroyed Homes and property completely wiped out Daily survival comes a task within it self No amount of relief help will heal the scars
The destruction is beyond comprehension The pain and grief is beyond words This is the most devastating event of our lifetime An events that has sadden the world
I pray that God will protect the survivors Strengthen their tired and weary bodies Heal their broken hearts And look after the fallen
_____________________________ Dedicated to the victims of the Tsunami That devastated so many countries Our prayers and support Are with them. December 26, 2004
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Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2005-01-05 07:31:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Tsunami
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:37:44 AM AEST (User
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You know what I like best about your poetry Jeff? It's the honest emotions you lend to the readers..and the subjects you write about.
You have no idea how much respect I have for you and your terribly ignored talent.
I wish we had a hundred like you here...
Larry
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Re: Tsunami
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:06:10 AM AEST (User
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Nice , sentimental write, for the ones who have been devastated. Prayers from all to the ones who lost, and will be still losing. Good write.
Brew~ |
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Re: Tsunami
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:24:16 AM AEST (User
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I'm gonna agree with Larry here, if all your poems are this good then people (including myself) have been missing out.
This is great, very heartfelt and so true.
There are members of this site that live out there that I am worried about.
Great write and great dedication.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Tsunami
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:38:14 AM AEST (User
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Amen. I have not seen any pictures of the disaster. I don't watch television, but I'm guessing if I saw it, I would respond much as you have. I wrote something like this after seeing the Titanic exhibit. It's so hard to fathom this kind of disaster, and we can't help but pour those emotions into words.
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Re: Tsunami
(User Rating: 1 ) by Scarlett on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 04:15:46 AM AEST (User
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very expressive and touching x |
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