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Theres nothing left to see
Contributed by
Kitty_cat
on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:38:43 AM in AEST
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Im tired
Of trying to
Break free
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see
Im tired
Of being someone
Elses property
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see
Im tired
Of people just
Disgarding me
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see
Im tired
Of trying to
Beg and plea
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see
Im tired
Of it never being a case
Of we
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see
Im tired
Of trying to be something
I'll never be
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see
Im tired
Of you
Never loving me
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see
Let the body hit the floor
Let the body hit the floor
Let the body hit the floor
Theres nothing left to say
Theres nothing left to see
Theres nothing left to see
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Kitty_cat
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2005-01-05 09:38:43]
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Re: Theres nothing left to see
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:44:42 AM AEST
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| It was good..But try not asking for comments it sounds worse to do so..I would have given you a comment regardless though..Reminds me of a song as well..But this is good. |
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Re: Theres nothing left to see
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by Kitty_cat on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:51:21 AM AEST
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thanks. last time I didnt ask for any comments I didnt get any, so I thought I better ask this time!
cat xx |
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Re: Theres nothing left to see
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:53:44 AM AEST
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Yeah...this also actually reminds me of a song. I dunno what song. lol. But this is vaguely familiar. Especially the end. Maybe it the repeated line.
I like this. The repeated line works well, but doesn't make it boring.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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