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My Dream
Contributed by
Lostinside
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Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:36:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Life is getting hard for me
I keep wishing I died
Last time I had this strange dream
This dream changed my life
In the dream I jumped out a window
I landed on hard stone
Died cause of that
But it wasn't known
I lay dead on the floor
But couldn't be scared
They saw me when they opened the door
But no one cared
The next morning got out of my bad
I didn't feel anything at all
Didn't feel happy didn't feel sad
So I prepared for my fall
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Lostinside
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2005-01-05 12:36:50]
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Re: My Dream
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by Tru2Myself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:48:20 PM AEST
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| I really like this. I feel that way sometimes. Like if I died no one would care. Its really hard. Great poem. Lauren |
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Re: My Dream
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 03:10:24 PM AEST
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great write.
i feel you have alot of resentment in your heart and that nobody cares that's sad.
chin up
cheers,
sue
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Re: My Dream
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by Hakiokusaken on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:34:07 AM AEST
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Great write, I like the way you structured the poem. I hope you learn to reallize that people do care, even if they don't show it. Excellent write. Keep up the good work.
*Hakiokusaken* |
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