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a flight of fancy...
Contributed by
Steeleyes
on
Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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flew off the mountain top
eyes closed into sky bluewhite streams of sound
greenybrown hills lifting up to vision
& swirling lines of telegraphs 'n cornfields
seen in one long smooth arc
and soaring over cascade-flecked ocean
plunging down into bubbles sparkling
turquoise filaments streaking everywhere
cool & greenbright
racing up
crashing into sunshine
speeding higher 'til blue shades to blackest black
'n the stars flash open 'n wondrous
EVERYWHERE
opening the heart ...
below ...
Earth coolblue 'n browngold
turns silent ...
one fragile blue moth floating on a moonbeam ...
Copyright ©
Steeleyes
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2002-12-02 23:30:00]
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Re: a flight of fancy...
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 12:41:22 AM AEST
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This is absolutely breathtaking, my favorite lines in here are where it says...soaring over cascade-flecked ocean plunging down into bubbles sparklingturquoise filaments streaking everywhere cool & greenbright.....then racing up to see the sunshine......sheesh im going to end up saying the whole poem down here in the comments again LOL....The whole poem captured me....this is beautiful...thanks for sharing it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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Re: a flight of fancy...
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by Steeleyes on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 06:28:50 PM AEST
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Ahh hello again! Yes, I typed this one into the comment box, that's why I created it twice!
This was quite a trip in my imagination... I like to try to let the conscious go while having to still use the logic side of the brain to write the words. This can be tricky!
I'm glad this one worked for you, I was almost content with the flow in the end. I'm hoping there'll be interactive software that let's you take a trip like this someday... ;D |
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Re: a flight of fancy...
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by wordsy on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 07:01:04 AM AEST
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A well worded weaving.
wordsy. |
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