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Don't Wanna Die
Contributed by
Lostinside
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Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:53:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She looks around
The place is empty
The knife she holds
It's getting heavier
She has no one who cares
No one with who she can share
Her feelings, her pain
This truth is driving her insane
She looks at the knife again
Bringing it close to her skin
It's almost touching her
In this battle she can't win
She looks around again
Till she sees a picture
Her parents laughing
She sits between them
She gets angry at herself
One last look at the knife
Before she throws it far away
She doesn't want to die
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2005-01-05 12:53:55]
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Re: Don't Wanna Die
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by Rhymingron on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 01:09:58 PM AEST
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| Poems about personal experiences are often the best. This one sounds so sincwere. |
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Re: Don't Wanna Die
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:55:51 PM AEST
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sad, but well written. it has alot of meaning.
cheers,
sue
xxx |
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Re: Don't Wanna Die
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:07:59 PM AEST
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| now this was good,I loved the ending |
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Re: Don't Wanna Die
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by Mandy2007 on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:36:48 PM AEST
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| This poem is awsome! It makes people realize some people are lucky and able to be pulled out of the feeling before doing it. Such as her, when she saw the picture, she realized she didn't want to die, she had peopel that cared. |
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