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Eternity
Contributed by
Kevin
on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:20:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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What a crazy life I choose to live in
What a crazy world I was born in
Where good things happen to the bad
And vice versa, thats what is sad
Good deeds go un-rewarded
Only do we see the bad reported
Pain, chaos, destruction on this earth
Happiness, joy, good will since birth
Love, hate, two complex things
I dont understand what either means
To love a person, I just dont know
To hate a person seems easy to show
But what is hate? What is love?
Is there a Hell? Is there Heaven above?
To many questions, not enough time
The thought of death is lurking in my mind
A couple of pills, a rather sharp knife
These are the ways to end my life
Whats there to live for?
Whats there to die for?
Is anything so important I need to stay?
Is there someone to live for each day?
Thieves, murderers, rapists, and liars
Devils, demons, and Hells fires
No good exists, what have we done?
Too late to turn back, weve had our fun.
Thats it, its over, weve ruined it all
No one will catch you when you fall
Screams of pain, cries of terror
Take a good look in the mirror
Look at yourself, see what youve become
Pathetic, pitiful, piece of scum
Ive seen myself, and Ive seen the rest
Now to drive the dagger into my chest
No more chances, its over for you and me
Death and sorrow for all eternity.
1-5-05
Copyright ©
Kevin
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2005-01-05 19:20:55]
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Re: Eternity
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by darkplaidbabe on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:25:23 PM AEST
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I loved this one...you can really feel the agony in it...beautiful.
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Re: Eternity
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by broken_soul08 on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:31:18 PM AEST
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| I love this poem! It seems as if it had just flowed out of you. I enjoyed your word choice and your opinions about the world's issues. You are very admirable. |
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Re: Eternity
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by Tru2Myself on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 08:19:09 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful. I asolutly loved it. Its amazing. Great work. |
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Re: Eternity
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:13:04 PM AEST
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| My sentiments exactly..but then I was already depressed and didn't need any help..I'll remember when I do where to come..thanx |
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Re: Eternity
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by noone on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 01:28:00 PM AEST
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I love this poem. You have poured out all of your feelings, i can feel your pain. This is a truly great write! Keep it up.
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