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useless light
Contributed by
prozac_memory
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:39:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im not your star anymore
The sky is full of useless light
But you seem to adore them all
And Im dimming and your seeing the new batch of beauty
I dont wanna crack and fall into this sleepless night
Of nightmares of your smile and hers
I dont wanna wake up with tear stained pillows
And blood stained wrists
I hate the useless light that loves you
I hate the useless light that you love
Cause I know that when this all ends
Ill be the broken one
Picking myself off the floor
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2005-01-06 08:39:24]
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Re: useless light
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:19:58 AM AEST
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Awww, this is so sad. I can really feel hurt in this piece.
I especially like this part:
Cause I know that when this all ends
I’ll be the broken one
Picking myself off the floor
...isn't that just the way?
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: useless light
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by Tru2Myself on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:45:36 AM AEST
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I love this. Its so unique and beautiful. Sad yes...but so great. Easy flowing and wow i just love it. Tear stained pillow and blood stainted wrists...deep. I like this alot.
Lauren |
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