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Razors Kiss
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:25:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Beautiful blood
Veins run dry
Giving up
Cannot cry
Lost all faith
Lost all hope
Nothing left
Cannot cope
Submitting to
Morose thoughts
Upon herself
Death she brought
With razorblades
Bitter kiss
And her life
She wont miss
Crimson blood
Tainted floors
Knock upon
Deaths cold door
Taken away
Down below
Cursed to hell
She does go
Torment, pain
Her awaited fate
To save her it
Is far too late
Copyright ©
EternalNight4x
... [
2005-01-06 12:25:59]
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Re: Razors Kiss
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by Tru2Myself on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:08:16 PM AEST
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Ok this is one of my favorites on the site. I really love it. It flows so well and i love your choice of words. Its beautiful yet so sad. I love it.
Lauren |
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Re: Razors Kiss
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by Crash on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:42:43 PM AEST
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| short and to the point lines, Strong emotions, and sucide, I love it!!!! This is one of my personal favorites on here, and i hope to read more of your work |
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Re: Razors Kiss
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by bonita2689 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 04:11:05 PM AEST
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| Love the way there is only two or three words to a line, makes this powerful. It's beautiful poem full of charismatic sorrow |
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Re: Razors Kiss
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by Mandy2007 on
Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:37:37 PM AEST
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| WOW! I LOVE THIS POEM! it really brings out what i feel. It shows emotion, and actually makes you feel like you're there as it's happening. |
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