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un-moulded
Contributed by
prozac_memory
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:43:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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When the rain is coming down strong
And I cant see through the darkness
The water has soaked everything
But me and you
Cause your not here and Im un-moulded
When the thunderstorm gets heavy
And the sound is deafening
The lightning brightens up everything
But me and you
Cause your not here and Im un-moulded
When sitting on the rocks is lonely
And the waves are crashing up cliffs
The sea is spraying everything
But me and you
Cause your not here and Im un-moulded
When in a corner crying to sleep
Remembering the painful past
It doesnt help the situation at all
I was defined in your arms
why did you un-mould me.
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2005-01-06 12:43:26]
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Re: un-moulded
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by hellsfallenangel on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 12:55:26 PM AEST
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nice write i was very moving well g2g bye
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Re: un-moulded
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by bonita2689 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 04:01:40 PM AEST
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| This is very sad, the repition is what makes it powerful and the ending even more. Lovely |
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Re: un-moulded
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:08:21 AM AEST
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The last stanza blew me away...
I was defined in your arms
what an incredible description!
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