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Plea
Contributed by
Emmie74
on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You're there with a Wonder
A Hope
A Dream
A Promise
Yet your soul is not.
I can't see you
I can't feel you
You're gone
Without a trace
Swept up in another life
To plea would be desperation
I am not there
...yet...
Copyright ©
Emmie74
... [
2002-12-03 07:00:00]
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Re: Plea
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 08:56:06 AM AEST
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Nice... I like it... especially the ending...
Good job!! |
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Re: Plea
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 07:49:26 PM AEST
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Weird...you're weird, man. Strange mood you were in. Good poem, though.
Love always,
~ Dee |
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Re: Plea
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by Emmie74 on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 05:32:24 PM AEST
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| I've never commented on my own poem... but now I totally understand it... I mean, it's only been a year and 12 days for it to catch on... It's about him being so distant. He doesn't know if he really does love me, or care for me, but he wants to.. He finally broke up with me, and well, I can feel my plea coming.. |
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