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Im walking alone
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:00:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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The world spins and cackles
its just anouther stride on the road now
as my dizzy eyes spin along the ground
Kiss chase has left me cheated and alone
and i no longer feel safe in my small exsistance
i ask myself frantic questions
"why wasnt i enough?"
but as i accept the awnsers the tears seem to choke me
and it feels like breathing is task
as i walk i hear my heart rattle in my tin body
so bruised but no longer fragile
as hopes and dreams are stolen
my mind cannot be mislead
and i sigh with every breath i take
knowing my spirit is broken
and with every step away from you i take
im burrying it into the ground
my bones ache and my eyes are red
with the silent crying iv done for so long
madness would be a relife
and ignorance would be bliss
just to wipe my mind
and start somwhere new
but memories that are usless and old to you
still taunt me
and the day is much darker
when the horizen is black
I dont understand so much
Im walking alone
my thoughts are settled with you
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loopylou
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2005-01-06 15:00:29]
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Re: Im walking alone
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by gherkin on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:24:34 PM AEST
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V. accurate depiction of what it feels like, and nicely put.
all the best
gherkin
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Re: Im walking alone
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by Mangs on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:15:37 PM AEST
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Very wonderful poem....ive written a few of these myself...know how it feels.
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Re: Im walking alone
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 03:23:41 PM AEST
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oh wow.
this is just great
i feel like i can feel everything that you are feeling right now. you have expressed yourself well, beautifully.
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