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Picture With A Twist
Contributed by
morgana
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:41:14 PM in AEST
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i want a picture
a picture with a twist
i'll carve this picture deep in my wrist
this picture is my own
this is my twisted wish
i always wanted a picture on my wrist
my unique little friend
that i show you all with pride
this picture on my wrist
is my picture with a twist
Copyright ©
morgana
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2005-01-06 15:41:14]
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Re: Picture With A Twist
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by gherkin on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:53:28 PM AEST
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there is no twist in this poem though is there? no depth, no meaning, just 'depressed' self harmy implied sentences that happen to rhyme.
You should write songs not poems (no offence intended)
gherkin
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Re: Picture With A Twist
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by karmen on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 01:57:13 AM AEST
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| its good... but i kinda agree with gherkin... |
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