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Awake yet Asleep
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:21:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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How Strange I feel ,
Like
I've just come back
from a VERY Long sleep.
My Senses tingle and My minds a blur .
I thought that I was still here!
Can they see the difference in me?
Do they really care?
It All Will Pass and be as anew.
Have faith the world goes on .
Even without you there.
Imigine I was Gone and finally Finished.
But unable to leave.
Trapped .
Held captive.
Curious and awe struck.
Left to Witness more of what lies ahead.
The same as before .
Perhap it will be different this time .
In silence I watch weeping .
Wishing for Higher Ground.
How strange this all feels.
Whisper
Copyright ©
Whisper
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2005-01-06 20:21:18]
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Re: Awake yet Asleep
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:22:08 PM AEST
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| amazing poem. very unique and entrancing. a poem that really shows your talent. |
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Re: Awake yet Asleep
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 12:09:35 AM AEST
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| increidble, awesome |
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Re: Awake yet Asleep
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by arden on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 03:40:39 PM AEST
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interesting and unique to say the least.
i liked it. well written. great work.
Arden |
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