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My star
Contributed by
Stonedraider23
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:44:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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On clear nights I always star gaze
Looking for her star
The brightest star in the sky
Light clouds roll in
The sky was lost
My bright star covered and lost
On clear nights
I'd lay out under the stars
You are the first one I see
Standing out from the rest
Beautiful and bright
Shining so bright she leads me
To where we first met
The place we first kissed
The last place I held you
You pointed at the star
I will always be here
Watching you at night
I'll always be your star
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2005-01-06 20:44:58]
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Re: My star
(User Rating: 1 )
by thegurl on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:09:06 AM AEST
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| by the time i was on the 3rd line i was grinning....this is beautiful..reading it you feel as if it was written for you...and by the end you feel like you're missing out on someone wonderful...great write. |
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