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She Died
Contributed by
kidpoet_213
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:47:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Day after day. Night after night. He would creep to her bedside And it wasnt a kiss that he was after. He wanted something more Something more from his little girl Now with her innocence lost. Shes paid the ultimate cost.
Cause the child inside of her has died. Its been beaten to a pulp Time after time Its been robbed of its innocent thoughts.
Murdered by the one man She thought she could always trust. But her took her life and turned it upside down inside out And made it a living hell!
Now theres nothing left to tell Except that
She died. The little girl that once lived inside. She died. To rise no more from the ashes of this life. She died. A beaten and broken little girl. She died. One day a long time ago. She died. Without ever being a little girl. She died.
Now the little girl has grown up And shes tired. Emotionally spent. Mentally twisted. This young girl lives. Physically pained. But theres nothing to be gained. Cause push has finally come to shove. Shove has finally come to push.
Nothing more. Nothing less. This is all shes ever seen and known. This is all thats ever been done to her Shes just been living on broken promises and empty dreams Her whole life through Wishing for things to be Different somehow Somehow renewed.
For all these years She felt like somebodys dirty play thing Spread out Soiled And used. Then thrown away. Its been a never ending cycle of abuse.
One long living nightmare Lived in a fiery hell But now shes got to reach deep down inside herself And resurrect that little girl. Cause although she died Shes still alive Tucked away beneath the all pain Hidden out of daddys sight
Shes alive. The little girl that lives inside. Shes alive. To rise out of the ashes of this life. Shes alive. Not beaten and broken anymore. Shes alive. To set straight the path that she once trod Shes alive. To make him pay for all of his wrongs. Shes alive.
All that he has done to her Has only made her stronger. Like a phoenix rising out of the ashes of a fire So shall this life rise out of the ashes of time.
She died yet shes still alive!
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Re: She Died
(User Rating: 1 ) by GingerB on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:01:12 PM AEST (User
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wow, kid, you can surely write! this is an excellent bit of work.
thank you for your sweet comment on my haiku.
Ginny |
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Re: She Died
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:07:04 PM AEST (User
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Wow...awesome write! |
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Re: She Died
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:12:41 PM AEST (User
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powerful, emotional, dark, captivating, full of meaning, and you all conveyed it well. well im one to believe in karma, so he will get his in threes. |
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Re: She Died
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 06:42:23 AM AEST (User
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wow that was powerful, very emotional, expressed well,
pixie xx |
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Re: She Died
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 08:54:13 PM AEST (User
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Wow!
Another masterpeice that many of us can relate to.
U did an excellent job with this one and I'm sure it will touch many heart's and help them realize there is inner healing if we just dig deep enuff.
Can't wait to see your new ones posted.
4-ever luv,
yomomma,
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