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Mistake
Contributed by
LostInLife
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:21:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You know you've made a mistake
By leaving me
I'm here lonely and broken without you
Didn't you realize how much fun we had together
You and I
Are meant for each other
I can feel it in my heart
That you and I should be together
The poems you wrote about me
Gave me that warm feeling inside
I care for you and love you
I tried to make you feel happy whenever you were down
Please come back
Nothing will be the same
Until we are with each other again
Copyright ©
LostInLife
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2005-01-06 22:21:40]
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Re: Mistake
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by hellsfallenangel on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 09:22:58 AM AEST
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nice write very moving comment on some of mine well g2g bye
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Re: Mistake
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:37:03 PM AEST
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A sad write for a sad situation. I certainly hope it works out. I feel for your hurt, but you are not responsible for his happiness. Yes if he does not come back things will not be the same, but different can be good in time.
A meaningful write
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