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the soft kiss goodnight
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:22:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The sun shines, as the water glistens
Your reflection is cast upon the waves
I stop and glance for awhile
I'm all alone in this exile
With every breath i breathe
You are constantly thought of deep within
i wished i could walk through the windows of time
To see when you'll finally be mine
My heart is breaking
My whole body is aching
It yearns for your touch
Oh how i've missed you so much
Hold me in your thoughts as
I hold you in my heart
Deep inside we'll never be apart
The sun is setting peacefully
The birds are soaring
The ocean roars as the waves bow gracefully
It's time to take my thoughts of you back from the sea
I know you and i are meant to be
My footprints are washed away from the sand
The next time I see the ocean I hope to be holding your hand
I close my eyes and go to bed
I feel the softness of your lips on my forehead
You come to me everynight
In my sleep to kiss me goodnight.....
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Re: the soft kiss goodnight
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by Whitelightning77 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:28:28 PM AEST
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very nice flow - well written
thanks for sharing!! |
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Re: the soft kiss goodnight
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by The_Callif on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:31:31 PM AEST
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| very good poetry, keep writing |
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Re: the soft kiss goodnight
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 11:53:29 PM AEST
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Very beautifull, senous write.
Master peice of beauty.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: the soft kiss goodnight
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by craz2 on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 06:29:49 AM AEST
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| VERY GOOD. I AM WAITING TO BE WITH ONE AGAIN. WHAT A LONELY TIME |
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Re: the soft kiss goodnight
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by jmpy84 on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 01:12:27 PM AEST
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| wonderful write |
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