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Genesynthesis
Contributed by
Kratur
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Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:22:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Me myself and I
The three-headed monster
That you call a trinity
We are the masturbating god
Watching the impure virgin as she bathes
We fought to see who would get to have her first
And when she gave birth we argued over who was the father
Isnt Jesus a bastard if His father was not married to His mother?
Isnt Jesus an inbreed if Abrahams wife was his sister?
Test-tube baby grown up to be insane
Starving carpenter, charismatic manipulator
In the beginning we created a man and a woman
Because we wanted to have an orgy
But since the serpent came to tell them the truth
We have to settle for sex with ourself
Isnt Jesus cursed if He was hanged from a tree?
Isnt Jesus guilty if He refused to even offer a plea?
Cult leader corrupting the country
Father of lies, commander of demons
We are the mystery in the sky
We are three men in one
If 6 is indeed the number of man
Then 666 is the number of God
Forsaken
Forgotten
Cursed
Guilty
Inbreed
Bastard
Scapegoat
Savior of the world
Copyright ©
Kratur
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Re: Genesynthesis
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by pixie on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:24:18 AM AEST
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well that was defenatley dark and very intresting to say the least. I liked alot
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Re: Genesynthesis
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:26:41 AM AEST
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| I was here |
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Re: Genesynthesis
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by TaintedSoul on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:59:12 AM AEST
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Very intriguing write that makes a definate statement. enjoyed!
peace
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Re: Genesynthesis
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by Nardo on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 04:54:11 PM AEST
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Thanks for your comment on Blood on your hands.
Believe me, I am not afraid to explore Death.
By the way, GREAT piece. |
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Re: Genesynthesis
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:58:50 PM AEST
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| Good write. You propose some great questions that christians just can't ever seem to explain. Much peace |
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Re: Genesynthesis
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by Kellros on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:35:56 AM AEST
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| I am still in awe of your skills and the way you can express yourself. Great write! |
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Re: Genesynthesis
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by zenmind on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 04:36:38 PM AEST
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Wow, I really like this piece. The story you have woven together here is incredible. I love your images----"masterbating god", "impure virgin" "Jesus an inbreed"----lol, These are really funny.
Test-tube baby grown up to be insane
Starving carpenter, charismatic manipulator
That's a great line. Once again, the way you let your images, speak for the poem makes this a great poem, and I suspect that your other poetry is also very good in this way.
I like the feelings you evoke throughout this piece, and I think is works well with the images you bring up about Jesus and God. You touch on taboo subjects in this poem, and I like that you had the balls to say what you did, because a lot of people would be offended, but it really doesn't matter.
Be True,
zenmind |
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