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seeds of doubt
Contributed by
mina-1
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Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 03:53:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I grew a rose and it finally sprouted
Not knowing if it'll grow, i surely doubted
I nurtured it and in a tower of strength it grew
As it soaked up the sun after the mornings dew
Each day that past the fragrance grew strong
Hoping and believing it would last so very long
As the days went past, I turned away my watchful eye
The seeds of doubt called weeds grew an arms length high
The weeds they reared their ugly poisonous heads
Destroyed my beautiful rose and left it for dead
They sucked the living light out of my fragrant rose
No matter what i did its sap just froze
I dug around it and nurtured it once again
My budding rose its strength it did regain
I will always keep my eye on my fragrant budding rose
So the seeds of doubt called weeds a threat no longer pose
'This is like our heart, turn your back on it and the seeds of doubt are sown in it.
Nurture it and a lifetime of happiness it'll hopefully give you'
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Re: seeds of doubt
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by bonita2689 on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 05:09:54 PM AEST
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| I completely agree! Bravo. This is excellent! |
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Re: seeds of doubt
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 12:19:06 AM AEST
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this is beautiful, i loved reading it very picturesque,
and filled with wisdom nicely done . . .
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Re: seeds of doubt
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| great poem |
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Re: seeds of doubt
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:54:29 PM AEST
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| i like the topic and everything about this. |
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