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needed words
Contributed by
tractorbabe
on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:27:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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needed words
and unsaid prayers
just another thought
rote down by layer
everything once
i thought was near
i need to find
your words are clear
my heart needs you now
more and more
i'm longing for you
like never before
i need to feel
your every need
i want to know
what you want from me
desiring
your every touch
it's to late now
i love you too much
nothing left to do
i cant turn away
i'm now yours forever
this i hope shall stay
Copyright ©
tractorbabe
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2005-01-07 20:27:02]
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Re: needed words
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by afterdark on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:27:59 PM AEST
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| It will not last forever |
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Re: needed words
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by autumngreeneyes on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:29:54 PM AEST
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| AD has a bad attitude..listen to your heart..and read his poetry before you listen to him..he's very sad.. good write by the way.. |
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Re: needed words
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by afterdark on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:34:55 PM AEST
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| Yes afterdark does have a terrible attitude..He is such a f-cucker |
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Re: needed words
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by BlindSuicide on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:45:06 PM AEST
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I agree he commented on my poem and just said "Hmmm" Neways this was a good write.
Much love
~Alucia~ |
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Re: needed words
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:37:14 AM AEST
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Just follow your heart and im sure things will work out for you. Good poem.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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