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Blck Rainbow
Contributed by
Rottenrioter
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Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:57:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm just a black rainbow
in a world full of color
For all the people in it
To stop,stare, and laugh at
I'm finally realizing my place
My future in this world
It doesn't look good
It's dark
Nothing left for me
So, that's it nothing else?
Of course
People like me have no rihgt place
I'm just one in a group of outcasts
For people to laugh at
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Rottenrioter
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2005-01-07 20:57:16]
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Re: Blck Rainbow
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by afterdark on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:59:25 PM AEST
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| A bit drainy really..But the flow worked for the most part..Good write |
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Re: Blck Rainbow
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 12:06:28 AM AEST
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| interesting and creative analogy. |
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