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Screaming Orgasm
Contributed by
nomadsoul
on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:59:52 PM in AEST
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Low light of the night
I could feel your heartbeat,
Touch is the feeling, likewise
Erotic moment froze in time
Succulent mystique, a cosmic lucidity
Heavy breathing, 120kmph heartbeat
Your soft lips, my unnerved fingertips
You and me
Weak in the knees,
Cold sweat, rush of the blood
Liquid sensation, oozing thoughts
Tripping desire, chilling spine
I cant hold it anymore
Copyright ©
nomadsoul
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2005-01-07 20:59:52]
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Re: Screaming Orgasm
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by afterdark on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 09:08:45 PM AEST
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| Ok, next time pick a better title..Very small and mindless..You could have done so much more here..Added more to the flow..To me it sounded to much like a letter to Penthouse. |
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Re: Screaming Orgasm
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 09:55:45 PM AEST
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| I have to agree with afterdark,I didnt quite understand "Touch is the feeling"? |
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Re: Screaming Orgasm
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 09:58:22 PM AEST
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| lol nice. haha. the other comment on here really got me. |
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Re: Screaming Orgasm
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by Sirena_Degana on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 09:58:55 PM AEST
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| Ok...aside from the fact that this is wonderful i understand...Touch is the Feeling i get very well....as obviously the close-minded people below didn't....i like this..i really captured the feeling...and hey if it IS a letter to penthouse..well just WOW....neato speedo man! |
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Re: Screaming Orgasm
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:36:23 AM AEST
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Hmm good lines wish it could have been longer lol. for the people who did not get the line "Touch is the feeling" then my god you need to explore your body to know this.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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