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A dreamers dream
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 12:01:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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To write you, in your most triumphant act,
I must imagine a thousand sparkling stars.
Still, i cannot begin.
All of the stars cannot bring you to me.
I see, in the stillest of night,
(the stars are your crown)
a folding and stirring light;
It is enough for me to see;
yet, immeasurable, vast;
how it takes my sight from me.
You are the stars
that shatter above the sea.
A dream that dreamers dream.
You are the endless night sky
rushing above me.
It is enough that I cannot touch you.
I know that you are there.
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2005-01-08 00:01:47]
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Re: A dreamers dream
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 12:10:19 AM AEST
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| very nice. interesting and captivating. |
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Re: A dreamers dream
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by TheEarlyNovember on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:03:31 AM AEST
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| "You are a dreamers dream" I love that line. Very good write. |
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Re: A dreamers dream
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:13:59 AM AEST
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a very nice poem. written well. i enjoyed reading it
luv,
sue |
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