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Lady Gray
Contributed by
maryetta
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:39:55 AM in AEST
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she gently floats from room to room through walls to walls
i watch in facination as she seems to just go through
she is a gentle soul and i really dont mind sharing at all
but her sadness makes me cry her sadness for eternity
to me she is lady gray who floats eternally
her history i do not know where shes from
there is a special feeling between us a bonding
she tries to guide me protect me she is my guardian
sometimes when she looks at me the tears will flow
to me she is lady gray who floats eternally
i never know where she will show up but she always does
im finding i dont feel as lonely anymore i feel complete
sometimes at night ill awaken she just floats by
her appearance now soothes me everythin is ok now
to me she is lady gray who floates eternally
she has become a part of me my nights are full again
i am no longer lonely she watches over me every night
all the pain and misery has somehow floated away
how she did it i do not know but i am comforted
to me she is lady gray who floats eternally
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Re: Lady Gray
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by emystar on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:50:53 AM AEST
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Very good writing, friend. Know what cha mean.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Lady Gray
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:10:05 AM AEST
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That was an interesting write, very poeticaly done too. Good poem.
Hugs,
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Re: Lady Gray
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by Baronhawk on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 01:43:07 AM AEST
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| A very tender and heartfelt poem, methinks, of a kind but sad spirit watching over a lonely soul. I love the image and the feel of this poem..it is quite well thought out indeed. But in my opinion the lines and flow needs work for a poem like this is supposed to be like the evening breeze that gently descends upon our consciousness. It brushes on us with a gentle touch. As such the rhythm and flow should be as lilting as the breeze. You may consider to change the word use and arrangement a bit to reflect this. But as I said, these are just opinions. As it is , it is quite a nice write on its own. |
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