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If Time Could Tell (end scene)
Contributed by
TheEarlyNovember
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:46:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The moon falls short to brilliancy
I've never taken to the night
Retreat as the stars cover the sky
I fear I won't sleep tonight
We grow old one day at a time
I lie awake deaf, to the sounds of life
Doesn't anybody know
I feel it everyday when my body aches
I remember this feeling come over me
I fear I will die in this place
I will not die in this place
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2005-01-08 03:46:20]
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Re: If Time Could Tell (end scene)
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:43:07 PM AEST
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Re: If Time Could Tell (end scene)
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by Stitch on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:44:06 AM AEST
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I like this. It captures feelings that few take the time to elaborate upon. I like the hopeful ending.
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