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forever love
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 06:41:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Take my hand lets soar through the night
Amidst the sky away from everyones sight
Take me to our special place
No one can ever replace
Here on this unspoilt land
We can walk on the beach hand in hand
The air is so crisp and refreshing
Hear the sounds of the waves as they come crashing
You touch my face with your gentle hand
We lay on the beautiful golden sand
You kiss me passionately on my lips
Running your fingers through my hair,
Your arms around my hips
My body aches for your touch
Baby i've missed you so much
Our bodies entwine with each other
Little sighs let out one after the other
You bring out the best in me
With you I'm a soul who's free
My heart yearns for your love
As ecstatsy takes us way above
No man could love me like you do
I want to spend the rest of my life with you
As passion burns the flames in my heart alight
Leave me in your arms all through the night
Lets stay in this special place
Untouched by man, can never be destroyed or replaced
This is where our hearts want to be
Nothing can come between you and me....
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mina-1
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2005-01-08 06:41:57]
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Re: forever love
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:25:50 AM AEST
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This is sweet. You are lucky to have a love that is so strong.
Great write.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: forever love
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by jmpy84 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:27:05 AM AEST
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| well written |
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Re: forever love
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by BlindSuicide on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:50:14 AM AEST
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Very well done. Love is a special thing indeed.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: forever love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:13:18 AM AEST
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| Sweet and nice write :-) |
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