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Walking On Broken Glass
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:39:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel like I am walking on broken glass,
Being cut from the shards of my past,
They stick deep underneath my skin,
I watch as I start to bleed from deep within.
Blood drops from me just like tears,
I will it to stop but still it appears,
Cascading now down my foot,
To my heart this is so much more than a cut.
This is the opening of old wounds & scars,
That I have carried with me so very far,
I was hoping that now maybe they would heal,
But it seems that memories have broken the seal.
I try to pull the offending glass from me,
But for some reason it doesnt want to come free,
I try to walk but I cant it hurts too much,
I have no strength to use as my crutch.
Id love to walk across a freshly swept floor,
With no shards of glass as it once was before,
But they lay there waiting for me to step across,
As they know that it is me wholl be at a loss
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2005-01-08 07:39:37]
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Re: Walking On Broken Glass
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by humboldthunny17 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:11:27 AM AEST
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| wow. this is soo emotional and really touched me. its a really good write and i think a lot of people know how u feel |
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Re: Walking On Broken Glass
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:15:47 AM AEST
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Wow, I really like this, sweetie.
I love that you write about real things and that I'm sure everyone can relate to your poems in some way.
Keep up the great work.
*hugs*
Phil xxxx |
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Re: Walking On Broken Glass
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by BlindSuicide on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:18:30 AM AEST
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Awww Pixie :-( *Hugs you tightly* I'm here if you need to talk. Yet another one of your beautiful masterpeices. Loved it as i always do. Very touching and i can definately relate.
Love ya muchly
~Alucia~ |
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Re: Walking On Broken Glass
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by Pretty_n_pink on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:43:23 PM AEST
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| hey...i really like ur poem. it speaks to me somehow. i really liked it alot and i just had to let you know..keep up the good work ! |
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