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all alone?
Contributed by
humboldthunny17
on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:08:40 AM in AEST
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she sat all alone in the world
no one to find her to help her get out
she thought no one cared for her words
so she sat around while the others would shout
while sitting alone one long day
she looked up and saw a boy with a bright smile
she smiled, he was walking her way
she'd been hoping for this for the longest while
he talked to her forever
lifting her spirits
she never thought, NEVER
someone would ever hear it
her soul was poured out
as closer this boy grew
together they'd shout
together they both knew
she would not sit all alone
in the world from here on
there was someone who had known
someone to join in her song
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2005-01-08 09:08:40]
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Re: all alone?
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by BlindSuicide on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:13:14 AM AEST
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Awww! Wish i could meet that special someone lol. Well great write.
Much love
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Re: all alone?
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by pixie on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:18:46 AM AEST
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brilliant poem, loved this, glad you are back writing :)
pixie xx |
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Re: all alone?
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:26:51 AM AEST
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Awww, this is so cute and sweet.
It's lovely when things like this happen.
Even better when someone writes so well about it.
Great poem,
*hugs* Phil xx |
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Re: all alone?
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by The_Callif on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:05:20 AM AEST
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| good poem, welcome back |
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Re: all alone?
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by jjones12 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:57:07 PM AEST
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that kinda souds like me. that was a really cute.
luv,jenna |
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