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The Glass
Contributed by
SlimStaple
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:11:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There are sounds buzzing through the air.
There is a promise painted in the halls
And a tear that has yet to fall from a blue eye.
There is a glass sitting on the table
Waiting for tears to fall into it
So it can flood the world with the truth.
A flag is fluttering in the wind
A promise broken and a world crumbling.
All hail what we used to stand for.
When waters tumbled down
And the world goes bye-bye
We will remember the glass of tears, telling us what was to come.
Copyright ©
SlimStaple
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2005-01-08 14:11:13]
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Re: The Glass
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:46:35 PM AEST
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| very original. captivating poem. i hope you feel happier now. =] |
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Re: The Glass
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by Sweetheart on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:32:41 PM AEST
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Great heart-felt write. I loved the part " we will remember the glass of tears, telling us what was to come." It speaks volumes. I hope that you can find happiness. Remember God is the perfect comforter. You're still in my prayers.
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Re: The Glass
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by freckle on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 01:33:04 PM AEST
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Good poem, it makes you stop and ponder. Nice work.
Carol |
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