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Hallucinating The Ghost
Contributed by
Diatribe
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:31:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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I watch my shadow watch me
from the foot of my bed
holding my tongue
to mute my scream
paralysis overcomes when I sleep
if I could move these fingers
and drift away
I'd rise from this body
to see my face
and finally realize
that I'm awake
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Diatribe
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2005-01-08 14:31:47]
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Re: Hallucinating The Ghost
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 05:24:20 PM AEST
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| Very short which is not the best..But overall it is a very good write..Good job. |
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Re: Hallucinating The Ghost
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by freckle on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:12:18 PM AEST
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Interesting twist to it. Unusual subject matter but I think that is cool.
Carol |
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