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My dream came true
Contributed by
LostDream
on
Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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When I keep on thinking
of that wonderful day
I just found myself sinking
in your breath once again.
When I start believing
that my dream came true
I just feel here that feeling,
I feel here there's you.
Will you hold me with passion?
Will you kiss me so deeply?
Here you've got my confession,
I will whisper it sweetly.
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LostDream
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2002-12-03 22:00:00]
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Re: My dream came true
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 01:06:44 PM AEST
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| this was a very sweet write,I liked this one! Christina |
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Re: My dream came true
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 08:18:52 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful..it's absolutely breathtaking...it captured somthing deep inside of me when i was reading it, i love the last lines where it says Here you've got my confession, I will whisper it sweetly....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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