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Disaster
Contributed by
breny
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 06:23:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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ten sleepless nights
nine kisses
eight different fights
seven wishes
six weeks where we stayed
five misses
four mistakes we made
three acts of jealousy
two best friends and brothers
one huge disaster
Copyright ©
breny
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2005-01-08 18:23:02]
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Re: Disaster
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by O7NeVeS on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:49:19 PM AEST
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| ur rite this poem doesn't mean much to me, but i like how u wrote it...it sounds like it was a pretty eventful something. TD |
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Re: Disaster
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 09:07:41 PM AEST
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| i agree with ne. the huge disaster probably isnt as bad as you think it is. |
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Re: Disaster
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:44:25 AM AEST
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it's all relative breny, but what ever it means it was a fasinatinng account of how complicated life can get, be that as it may, a splendid peice of writting
as always . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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