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Exhale
Contributed by
Dri
on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 06:46:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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breathe in, exhale
youre talking again
trying to make it sound normal
trying to say my name
but it touches those lips
the word contorts and dies
the gymnast didnt make it off the bar
just hanging there
every now and again we forget to breathe
without each other there to remind us
reminding me to exhale
youre talking again
trying to make it sound real
trying to set the stage
but who are you trying to fool?
I wrote the play
I wrote the score
its just not believable anymore
every now and again we forget we know
every thing about us, every sad little thing
you are a date penciled in on my calendar
when I see you I nearly swallow my breath
you are waiting for me to exhale
breathe in, breathe out
you smile because I say it out loud breathe in
exhale
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Dri
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Re: Exhale
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:47:50 PM AEST
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| This reminded me of something in my not so long ago past..A good write.. |
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Re: Exhale
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by autumngreeneyes on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:50:18 PM AEST
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| THIS IS WONDERFUL.....!!!!!!! |
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Re: Exhale
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by LevyMetal on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:03:29 PM AEST
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| very sensual. made me relive a personal situation by your detailed discriptions. |
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Re: Exhale
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:54:30 PM AEST
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That was a little clever..
The concept is appealing..
to me anyway. |
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Re: Exhale
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by Dri on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:25:32 PM AEST
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gahh! i left out a line!
every now and again we forget to breathe
without each other there to remind us
"you are a string, tied to my finger"
reminding me to exhale
you might have noticed that it sort of chopped off... sorry, guys!!
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